Sunday, February 16, 2014

Facade

I heard the song wafting from your window;
Maria, Juliette, Roxanne.
I swear you were standing there
only a note ago,
but when I ran up the steps to peek,
I saw your facade.





© copyright K. Lynette Erwin, 2014
Mag 207


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12 comments :

  1. Tess KincaidFebruary 16, 2014 at 11:24 AM

    I think Blogger ate my comment! This is lovely, Lynette. So fun to see you at Magpie...

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    1. LynetteFebruary 16, 2014 at 11:26 AM

      Thank you, Tess. I think I'm going to enjoy it!

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  2. Laurie KolpFebruary 16, 2014 at 11:54 AM

    Bravo! Well done, Lynette.

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  3. humbirdFebruary 16, 2014 at 12:50 PM

    It's interesting how building can support the idea...~ Very witty.

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  4. BerowneFebruary 16, 2014 at 1:04 PM

    Cleverly adroit response to the prompt...

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  5. Kathe W.February 16, 2014 at 1:39 PM

    Excellent- love the last line!

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  6. KayFebruary 16, 2014 at 2:57 PM

    divine!!

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  7. RajlakshmiFebruary 16, 2014 at 8:38 PM

    I so loved the ending of this one. Makes you rething about the people you know.

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  8. HelenaFebruary 19, 2014 at 5:35 PM

    Succinct yet saying a lot. Nice piece!

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  9. Belva Rae StaplesFebruary 20, 2014 at 8:51 AM

    Clever as well as beautiful!

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  10. Little NellFebruary 20, 2014 at 11:05 AM

    A romantic doomed to disappointment; lovely poem.

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  11. AnonymousFebruary 20, 2014 at 3:08 PM

    it is a wonderful feeling....anticipation...

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