Sunday, February 16, 2014

Facade

I heard the song wafting from your window;
Maria, Juliette, Roxanne.
I swear you were standing there
only a note ago,
but when I ran up the steps to peek,
I saw your facade.





© copyright K. Lynette Erwin, 2014
Mag 207






13 comments :

  1. I think Blogger ate my comment! This is lovely, Lynette. So fun to see you at Magpie...

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    1. Thank you, Tess. I think I'm going to enjoy it!

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  2. It's interesting how building can support the idea...~ Very witty.

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  3. Cleverly adroit response to the prompt...

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  4. I so loved the ending of this one. Makes you rething about the people you know.

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  5. Succinct yet saying a lot. Nice piece!

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  6. A romantic doomed to disappointment; lovely poem.

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  7. it is a wonderful feeling....anticipation...

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