You blew in with no warning and,
in typical fashion,
with your destructive, acerbic, tongue,
peeled the paint from off the walls,
and left me covered in the dust of
your destruction.
So here I sit
trying to decide where to
begin picking up the pieces
leftover from the tirade.
Flip the switch.
The lamp is still on.
© K. Lynette Erwin, 2014
Really good!
ReplyDeleteNicely done Lyn
ReplyDeleteI know people like this...you describe their destruction perfectly...
ReplyDeleteI know people like this, too. I think we all do, unfortunately. Thanks for your comment, Tess.
ReplyDeleteI love how powerfully you internalised this image , wow
ReplyDeleteWhere to start indeed! A perfect match for the prompt!
ReplyDeleteOoh, vivid!
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